In this contents page I think that the banner along the top worked well and I look to try and mirror it against the "Contents" which runs down the side of the page.
I like this, particularly the black behind the orange writing, it makes it stand out and it looks appealing. I like how you've layed out the page numbers and what on each page. It's easy to follow and looks professional. The only points I'd change would be that Liana looks a little bit like she's standing on one leg rather than leaning and that the headings such as 'reviews' are all different sizes, some are more stretched than others and I think they'd look more like a magazine if they were consistent.I really like the colour palette because it matches the genre you showed in your pitch and it's a little bit different, which again I think matches what your trying to do.
Strengths
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categories
page numbers
articles
Clear and suitable photo
Three colou palette used
symmetry
Targets
What is Leana leaning on?
Page number
Font needs to match cover fonts
more images required
'white' space to be filled below
This is not too far away from being not bad at all
I like this, particularly the black behind the orange writing, it makes it stand out and it looks appealing. I like how you've layed out the page numbers and what on each page. It's easy to follow and looks professional. The only points I'd change would be that Liana looks a little bit like she's standing on one leg rather than leaning and that the headings such as 'reviews' are all different sizes, some are more stretched than others and I think they'd look more like a magazine if they were consistent.I really like the colour palette because it matches the genre you showed in your pitch and it's a little bit different, which again I think matches what your trying to do.
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