Masthead position and size Main artists font position and size barcode, date, price all present superlatives and 'puff' used
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Rupert, the guitar, look where you've put the guitar. Always remember when making a magazine that unless you're using a close up of the artists face you shouldn't crop the top of their head off. The masthead is seldom covered up, and certainly not on a first addition.
Nice job Rupert. I like the fonts and the way the guitar has been shown. Personally i don't like the way the guitar is positioned and i think it would look better if he was holding or playing it rather then riding it. Also the mast head is covered. Keep with the same ideas Rupert just a few tweeks are needed.
I like the layout for the last front cover, but I think that the cartoon guitar doesn't really work and also the black 'Galvenez' doesn't really stand out enough when its black, I think you should keep it the same colour as the 'Rory' part.
Good points
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Main artists font position and size
barcode, date, price all present
superlatives and 'puff' used
Targets
Rupert, the guitar, look where you've put the guitar.
Always remember when making a magazine that unless you're using a close up of the artists face you shouldn't crop the top of their head off.
The masthead is seldom covered up, and certainly not on a first addition.
Nice job Rupert. I like the fonts and the way the guitar has been shown. Personally i don't like the way the guitar is positioned and i think it would look better if he was holding or playing it rather then riding it. Also the mast head is covered. Keep with the same ideas Rupert just a few tweeks are needed.
ReplyDeleteI like the layout for the last front cover, but I think that the cartoon guitar doesn't really work and also the black 'Galvenez' doesn't really stand out enough when its black, I think you should keep it the same colour as the 'Rory' part.
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